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What kind of traditional food or beverage do Koreans usually offer their guests at home?

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2021-12-22 291

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Koreans usually cooked for them in person when their guests visit at home. There are many kinds of dishes to serve. Among them, I think Japchae and Bulgogi are very common and famous dishes for guests in Korea. I think whoever likes and enjoys these dishes if someone tried these for the first time, even foreigners. Because these are used soy sauce and sugar so its taste is very popular and not spicy. We also make and eat it with family for special days like birthday parties and national holidays.
I think traditional beverages for guests are sweet rice drink and persimmon punch. We can look at these in the buffets all the time in Korea. These are very sweet beverages but making them in person is a little hard and complex for the younger generation these days. So, I think most people give their guests a glass of coffee at home. But if some guests want to drink them, we can buy them from any market easily.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Chloe!

Koreans usually cooked for them in person when their guests visit at home. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: Koreans usually would personally cook for them when their guests visit at home. 
There are many kinds of dishes to serve. 
>>> correct 
Among them, I think Japchae and Bulgogi are very common and famous dishes for guests in Korea. 
>>> correct 
I think whoever likes and enjoys these dishes if someone tried these for the first time, even foreigners. 
>>> OR: I think anyone would like and enjoy these dishes if he/she tries these for the first time, even foreigners. 
>>> OR: I think whoever tries these for the first time would like and enjoy them, even foreigners.
Because these are used soy sauce and sugar so its taste is very popular and not spicy. 
>>>  Because these are made with soy sauce and sugar so its taste is very popular and not spicy. 
We also make and eat it with family for special days like birthday parties and national holidays.
>>>   correct
I think traditional beverages for guests are sweet rice drink and persimmon punch. 
>>>  correct
We can look at these in the buffets all the time in Korea. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: We can easily see them in the buffets in Korea.
These are very sweet beverages but making them in person is a little hard and complex for the younger generation these days. 
>>>  correct 
So, I think most people give their guests a glass of coffee at home. 
>>> correct 
But if some guests want to drink them, we can buy them from any market easily.
>>> correct  
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