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Use the verb study to make sentences in different verb tenses.

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2021-12-22 478

회원님의 영작문

1. past tenses.
There are many ways to reduce my stress. First, I exercised regularly. When I exercised, I could concentrate on exercising. By doing so, I could forget my source of stress. For example, I usually swam when I got stress. Second, I meditated regularly. When I meditated, I could get clean mind. By doing so, I could find my source of stress. Third, I cooked healthy food. When I cooked and ate delicious food, I felt better. By doing so, I could reduce my stress.

2. present tenses
I have a habit for planning. To be specific, I always plan my work in advance and finish the task on time. When I plan my work, I feel I can work more efficiently. This habit makes my life more flexible.

3. past perfect tenses
I have been to many countries and all the countries are beautiful. But Australia was the most impressive. I had a chance to take a class and this was so different from Korea. Especially, the student-centered class is very impressive.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello!^^ 

Thank you for submitting your homework. 
Please check the correction below. 
I enjoyed reading your answers. 

Teacher Andrea 

1. past tenses.
The statements below should not be in the past tense because you do it regularly. They should be in the present tense.

There are many ways to reduce my stress. 
>> Correct 

First, I exercised regularly. 
>> First, I exercise regularly. 

When I exercised, I could concentrate on exercising. 
>> When I exercise, I can concentrate more. 

By doing so, I could forget my source of stress. 
>> By doing so, I could forget the source of my stress. 
>> OR:" By exercising, I forget the reason why I'm stressed. 

For example, I usually swam when I got stress. 
>> I usually swim when I am stressed. 

Second, I meditated regularly. 
>> Second, I also meditate. 

When I meditated, I could get clean mind. 
>> When I meditate, I can clear my mind. 

By doing so, I could find my source of stress. 
>> Meditation is another way for me to forget the source of my stress. 

Third, I cooked healthy food. 
>> Lastly, I cook healthy food. 

When I cooked and ate delicious food, I felt better. 
>> When I cook and eat delicious food, I feel better.  

By doing so, I could reduce my stress.
>> (Not needed anymore) 

2. present tenses

I have a habit for planning. 
>> My habit is planning. 

To be specific, I always plan my work in advance and finish the task on time. 
>> Correct 

When I plan my work, I feel I can work more efficiently. 
>> When I plan my work, I feel I work more efficiently. 

This habit makes my life more flexible.
>> Correct 

3. past perfect tenses

I have been to many countries and all the countries are beautiful. 
>> I had been to many countries and all the countries I visited were beautiful. 

But Australia was the most impressive. 
>> Correct 

I had a chance to take a class and this was so different from Korea. Especially, the student-centered class is very impressive. 
>>  I had a chance to take a class and this was so different from Korea especially the student-centered class. This is very impressive. 
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