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What do you enjoy about family reunions?

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We usually hold family reunions for special days like national holidays and grandmothers¡¯ birthdays. We enjoy having delicious food and having a lot of conversations that we can¡¯t talk to each other in the meantime in family reunions. Most of my extended family likes barbecue so we always prepare lots of meets and have it when we meet. We sometimes drink some alcohol with our parents as well because most of my cousins are adults. My aunt prepares some bottles of wine for us. Both sides of grandfathers passed by a long time ago, so we just meet our grandmothers. Fortunately, they are still very healthy so we can be relieved. We always think we have to gather together more for grandmothers. We also try to show our happy side to grandmothers. I wish my family reunions keep longer and all of my extended family are healthy.

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We usually hold family reunions for special days like national holidays and grandmothers¡¯ birthdays. 
>>> correct                 
We enjoy having delicious food and having a lot of conversations that we can¡¯t talk to each other in the meantime in family reunions. 
>>> OR:  We enjoy having delicious food and having a lot of conversations about things we couldn't talk about in family reunions.    
Most of my extended family likes barbecue so we always prepare lots of meets and have it when we meet. 
>>>  Most of my extended family likes barbecue so we always prepare lots of meats and have it when we meet.   
We sometimes drink some alcohol with our parents as well because most of my cousins are adults. 
>>>   correct  
My aunt prepares some bottles of wine for us. 
>>>   correct  
Both sides of grandfathers passed by a long time ago, so we just meet our grandmothers. 
>>>  Both sides of grandfathers passed away a long time ago, so we just meet our grandmothers.   
Fortunately, they are still very healthy so we can be relieved. 
>>> correct     
We always think we have to gather together more for grandmothers. 
>>> correct     
We also try to show our happy side to grandmothers. 
>>>  correct    
I wish my family reunions keep longer and all of my extended family are healthy.
>>>  correct    
>>> OR: I wish my family reunions continue longer and all of my extended family are healthy.

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