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People who worry about earth warming and abnoral climate changing blame for food waste.

There are many people on earth suffering from starving.

Recently the number of refugees is increasing due to political conflicts in the Middle East Asia.

Some countries waste food, some people are starving death and disease because of hunger.

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Hi Ms. Lily! Good to hear from you. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts. 
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People who worry about earth warming and abnoral climate changing blame for food waste.
>>> Concerned people blame global warming and abnormal climate change as the reason for food waste.
There are many people on earth suffering from starving.
>>> There are many people on Earth suffering from hunger.
>>> There are many starving people on Earth.
Recently the number of refugees is increasing due to political conflicts in the Middle East Asia.
>>>  Recently the number of refugees is increasing due to political conflicts in  Middle East Asia.
Some countries waste food, some people are starving death and disease because of hunger.
>>> Some countries waste food, some people are starving to death and getting diseases  because of hunger.
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