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Let me tell monster killer hero Heraclass.
His father is the god zeus.
He is very strong.
Heraclass grasp the snake when 1age.
He grow older all of people can't fight.
First, he go to the cave to fight with lion.
Then kill all the monster.
When he die became gods.

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Thank you for writing this Lyla. Well done! - Teacher Ivy

Let me tell monster killer hero Heraclass.

>> Let me talk about the monster hero killer, Hercules.
His father is the god zeus.

>> Hs father is the god, Zeus.
He is very strong.

>> Correct
Heraclass grasp the snake when 1age.

>> Hercules grabbed a snake when he was 1.
He grow older all of people can't fight.

>> When he grew older, all the people can¡¯t fight.
First, he go to the cave to fight with lion.

>> First, he went to the cave to fight with a lion.
Then kill all the monster.

>> Then, he killed all the monsters.
When he die became gods.

>> When he died, he became a god. 

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