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My brother\'s advantage

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Before I say the best advantage about my brother you should know 4 things about personality. First is being polite, second is being gentle. Third is being fair, and being wise. These are 4 things that good people have. My brother has these 4 things. It is the best advantage that my brother has. If people have it, the people can keep friend relationship for a long time. Usually, ENTP doesn't have them. That's why my mother always say, 'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother, hey Dave(my brother), discipline your brother!'. In conclusion, I have to respect my brother's advantage and try to have that '4 things'.

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Hi, Daniel! Merry Christmas! Thank you for sharing about your brother's personality. It's okay not to have what your brother has. It's okay to be unique. 

- Teacher Debbie

Before I say the best advantage about my brother you should know 4 things about personality.  
First is being polite, second is being gentle. Third is being fair, and being wise. 
>> Before I write about the best thing about my brother, you should know four kinds of personality: polite, gentle, fair and wise.

These are 4 things that good people have. 
>> These are the four things that good people have.

My brother has these 4 things.
>> My brother has these four things.

It is the best advantage that my brother has. 
>> These are the best things that my brother has. 

If people have it, the people can keep friend relationship for a long time.
>> If people have these, they can keep relationships for a long time.

 Usually, ENTP doesn't have them. 
>>  Usually, people with the ENTP personality don't have them.

That's why my mother always say, 'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother, hey Dave(my brother), discipline your brother!'.
>> That's why my mother always says, 'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother. Hey, Dave! Teach your brother!"

In conclusion, I have to respect my brother's advantage and try to have that '4 things'.
>> In conclusion, I have to respect my brother's strengths and try to have these four things.
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