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My best holiday is New Year's Day three years ago.
Because It was a holiday after passing an entrance exam. I was so happy and feel free that day.

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Hi Julie!^^ 

Thank you for sending your homework. 
Indeed, New Year is the best holiday!^^ 
New year means new plans, new achievements and new opportunities. 
It is not the day itself for me, but the fact that we are welcoming the new year with positive vibes. :) 

Teacher Andrea 

My best holiday is New Year's Day three years ago.
>> Correct 
Because It was a holiday after passing an entrance exam. 
>> It was the holiday after me passing the entrance exam. 
I was so happy and feel free that day
>> I was so happy and felt free that day. 
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