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Which greeting kind of annoys you?

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I personally hate the deep bow of korea. it evoke me relationship of top and bottom. l think that every people are equal and should receive fair treatment. however, the deep bow of korea is a symbol of subordinate. of course, it is sometimes essential for courtesy and tradition. but I insist on reducing the frequency of this greeting. also, I don't like the greeting of kiss or excessive touch. that is why it is not hygienic and burdensome for me. In fact, korea society is too conservative to accept this things. actually, it can be rude for elder people in korea

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Hi, Tae Yun! Thank you for doing your homework. Your answer is interesting. 

Please take of the ff:

a. Please remember to capitalize the first letter of proper nouns.
b. Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

- Teacher Debbie

I personally hate the deep bow of korea.
>> I hate the deep bow of Korea.

it evoke me relationship of top and bottom. 
>> To me, it represents top and bottom. 

this is because l think that every people are equal and should receive fair treatment. 
>>  I think that all people are equal and should receive fair treatment.

however, the deep bow of korea is a symbol of subordinate.
>> However, the deep bow of Korea is a symbol of subordination.

of course, it is sometimes essential for courtesy and tradition. but I insist on reducing the frequency of this greeting.
>> Of course, it is sometimes essential for courtesy and tradition, but I insist on reducing the frequency of using this greeting.
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