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Dear Don,

In Korea, Young people have to respect older people. that is Korea traditional custom. When I was young, I respected senior people and they had a lot of experience then me, so I have to learn a lot from them. Korea language have a honorific expressions. so young people have to say honorific sentence to older people. when I was young, I said to people my age is older then other people, because of our traditional custom. but as you know my age is over 50, so I want to decrease my age. in Korea, we use lunar birthday. so it is pass Dec. 31 and even if it is Jan. 1, we don't count add age. if it is pass lunar birthday, we count adding age.

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Hi Andrew!

Good Wednesday! See you later in our class ^^

T. DON

In Korea, Young people have to respect older people.
>> CORRECT

That is Korea traditional custom.
>> That is Korea's traditional custom.

When I was young, I respected senior people and they had a lot of experience then me, so I have to learn a lot from them.
>> When I was young, I respected senior people because they had a lot of experiences than me so I have to learn a lot from them.

Korea language have a honorific expressions. so young people have to say honorific sentence to older people.
>> Korean language have honorific expressions so young people have to say honorific sentences to older people.


when I was young, I said to people my age is older then other people, because of our traditional custom. but as you know my age is over 50, so I want to decrease my age.
>> When I was young, I said to people my age is older than other people because of our traditional custom, but as you know my age is over 50, so I want to lessen my age.

in Korea, we use lunar birthday. so it is pass Dec. 31 and even if it is Jan. 1, we don't count add age. if it is pass lunar birthday, we count adding age.
>> In Korea, we are using Lunar calendar so after Dec. 31 and even if it is Jan. 1, we don't add our age. If it is after lunar calendar, then we add our age.
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