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How do you motivate yourself?

작성자: 성*영
2021-12-29 802

회원님의 영작문

There are many ways to motivate myself.But if I have to choose I would like to say these three things.
First, I’ll always plan my work in advance and I give me a present when I finished my work on time. By doing so I can get more energy and do my best in my work to get the present.This will be improve my intrinsic motivation. Second, l would motivate when I am acknowledged to other people. When I finished my work other people give me some complement and positive feedback. As a result, I can feel sense of achievement This will make me motivate to other work. Third, I will motivate when I get to result I want. I did my best in many times. There is a famous saying, Your effort will never betray you. When I get as much the result as I did my best, it will make me motivate too.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sally!^^ 

“Happiness is not by chance, but by choice.” – Jim Rohn

This is one of the quotes that I really like. Motivating yourself is a  little hard specially when there are so many things that need to be done in a short period of time. It i sup to us if we want to be tired but happy or tired and stressed out.

Teacher Andrea

There are many ways to motivate myself.
>> Correct 

But if I have to choose I would like to say these three things.
>> But if I have to choose, I would like to say these three things. 

First, I’ll always plan my work in advance and I give me a present when I finished my work on time. 
>> First, I will always plan my work in advance and I will give myself an award/reward/present when I finished the work on time. 

By doing so I can get more energy and do my best in my work to get the present.
>> By doing so, I will be more energized and I will do my best to get the reward. 

This will be improve my intrinsic motivation. 
>> I will become more intrinsically motivated. 

Second, l would motivate when I am acknowledged to other people. 
>> Second, I am motivated when I am being acknowledge by other people. 

When I finished my work other people give me some complement and positive feedback. As a result, I can feel sense of achievement 
>> When I am done with my work and other people will give me a complement and positive feedback, I can feel that I am an achiever. 

This will make me motivate to other work. 
>> This will make me more motivated for my other work. 

Third, I will motivate when I get to result I want. I did my best in many times. 
>> Third, I am motivated when I get the result that I want since I did my best in many times. 

There is a famous saying, Your effort will never betray you. 
>> There is a famous saying, "Your effort will never betray you." 

When I get as much the result as I did my best, it will make me motivate too. 
>> Getting the result that I deserve for working hard is my motivation too. 

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