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Female teachers who gave birth don't nothing compensate for their co-workers.
Young people who they enjoy such as welferes just think their rights.
So co-workers are psychologically uncomfortable even though it is legal policy.
The leave or rights og some teachers make others offened and complict in school organization.
Some female teachers who pregnant or gave birth give impression that they don't work hard and thet work the least time.

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Hello there Ms. Lily! Society is changing. but I think we have to continue doing good for others. This kind of behavior is observed also in the Philippines, but there are more people who are really considerate of others.
Aki~
Female teachers who gave birth don't nothing compensate for their co-workers.
>>>  Female teachers who gave birth do nothing to compensate their co-workers.
Young people who they enjoy such as welferes just think their rights.
>>> Young people who enjoy such welfare, just only think of their rights.
So co-workers are psychologically uncomfortable even though it is legal policy.
>>> CORRECT!
The leave or rights og some teachers make others offened and complict in school organization.
>>> The maternity leave or rights of some teachers offend and create conflicts in the school organization.
Some female teachers who pregnant or gave birth give impression that they don't work hard and thet work the least time
>>>  Some female teachers who are pregnant or just gave birth give impression that they don't need to work hard and that they have  to work the least time.
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