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I will miss my friends

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If I leave Korea, then I think I'll miss my friends in Korea. I can't find some machines in other country too, but I can't meet my friends in other country. Though I can make other friends, but I can't meet the same friends in Korea. However, I think missing is useless. I can't meet my friends in the other country. No matter how I miss them, nothing ever happens. They can't follow me or suddenly appear in front of me. In my opinion, we just have to remember them. We don't have to miss them. In conclusion, I will miss my friends, but I think it is useless.

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Hi, Daniel! Thanks for doing your homework. You were able to answer the question. However, you have to focus on pronouns. 

- Teacher Debbie


If I leave Korea, then I think I'll miss my friends in Korea.
>> If I leave Korea, then I think I'll miss my friends. 

 I can't find some machines in other country too, but I can't meet my friends in other country. 
>>  I can't meet them in other countries. 

Though I can make other friends, but I can't meet the same friends in Korea. 
>> Though I can make other friends, I can't be with them.

However, I think missing is useless.
>> However, I think missing them will be useless.

I can't meet my friends in the other country. No matter how I miss them, nothing ever happens. 
>> No matter how much I miss them, nothing will happen.

They can't follow me or suddenly appear in front of me. 
>> This is a good sentence.

In my opinion, we just have to remember them. 
>> I just have to remember them.

We don't have to miss them. 
>> I don't have to miss them.

In conclusion, I will miss my friends, but I think it is useless.
>> In conclusion, I will miss my friends, but I think it will be useless.
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