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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?

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When it comes to the disadvantage of it, It is hard to work with a person who is different from me. It takes us to understand working style, the manners of handling work. and things like that. Sometimes I could argue with him. In extreme cases, office climate can get heavy because of my argument with him.

But Working with different working styles helps me open up different perspectives on work. Through experiencing new styles of work, I can get out of my stereotype of work, and develop my business ability in the long term.

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Hi, Steve! Thank you for doing your homework. Your reply is the perfect answer to the given question.  Please take note of the corrections though. 

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When it comes to the disadvantage of it, It is hard to work with a person who is different from me. 
>> When it comes to its disadvantage, working with a person who is different from me is hard.

It takes us to understand working style, the manners of handling work. and things like that.  Sometimes I could argue with him. 
>> Because it takes time to understand this person's working style, manners of handling work, and other things like these, I could get into an argument with him. 

In extreme cases, office climate can get heavy because of my argument with him.
>> In extreme cases, the climate in the office can get heavy because I argued with him.

But Working with different working styles helps me open up different perspectives on work. 
>> However, working with people with different working styles can help me be open to different perspectives on work.

Through experiencing new styles of work, I can get out of my stereotype of work, and develop my business ability in the long term.
>> Through experiencing new working styles, I can get be open minded and develop my business ability in the long term.
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