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I think it is important to have similar values and mindsets with my friends. Because we can respect each other when we have similarities. Even though we have some differences, we can communicate well and fully understand each other. Becoming a friend is a hard thing but it is very meaningful in our lives too.

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Good day, Irene!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think it is important to have similar values and mindsets with my friends. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Having similar values and mindsets with my friends is important.
Because we can respect each other when we have similarities.
>> That's because we can respect each other when we have similarities.
 Even though we have some differences, we can communicate well and fully understand each other.
>> CORRECT!
 Becoming a friend is a hard thing but it is very meaningful in our lives too.
>> CORRECT!
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