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Why is English fluency significant for you?

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ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> > Why is English fluency significant for you?

Because me and my family will go Singapore.
My father change his company so we must go there.
This is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.

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Thanks for this Jin. When are you planning to move to Singapore?

Because me and my family will go Singapore.
>>> Because me and my family will go to Singapore.  
My father change his company so we must go there.
>>> My father changed his company so we must go there.
>>> OR: My father moved to another company so we must go there.  
This is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
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