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About Han river park

작성자: 김*우
2022-01-03 291

회원님의 영작문

I'll write about Han river park in Seoul. There are lots of Han river parks, but I'll write the most popular parks among them.
First, I'll explain why it is the most popular park. Because it is located in the middle of Seoul, called 'Yeouido'. It is one of the most developed town in Seoul, so there are lots of people live in it and there lots of service centers. In my opinion, because this area is so famous or good for picnic, lots of people go to picnic to here.
Second, I will write about other information about it. Lots of festivals are hosted by government. However, because of this festival and lots of people, COVID-19 was spread in it. About 20 people were infected in this place. So now government closed down it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Daniel! Thank you for doing your homework! Please take note of the corrections.


- Teacher Debbie


I'll write about Han river park in Seoul.
>> I'll write about Han River Park in Seoul.

There are lots of Han river parks, but I'll write the most popular parks among them.
>> There are lots of Han River Parks, but I'll write about the most popular among them.

First, I'll explain why it is the most popular park. 
>> This is a good sentence.

Because it is located in the middle of Seoul, called 'Yeouido'.
>> This park is located in Yeouido, which is in the middle of Seoul.

 It is one of the most developed town in Seoul, so there are lots of people live in it and there lots of service centers. 
>> Yeouido is one of the most developed towns in Seoul, so there are lots of people who live in it, and there are lots of service centers. 

In my opinion, because this area is so famous or good for picnic, lots of people go to picnic to here.
>> Because this area is very famous for picnics, lots of people go to the park.

Second, I will write about other information about it. 
>> I'll write more information about it.

Lots of festivals are hosted by government. 
>> Lots of festivals are hosted by the government. 

However, because of this festival and lots of people, COVID-19 was spread in it.
>> However, because of these festivals and the number of visitors, the COVID-19 infections spread.

 About 20 people were infected in this place. So now government closed down it.
>> About 20 people were infected in this place, so the government closed it down.
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