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I think the most popular way of advertising is using a social media (SNS). These days, many companies use SNS as a good way of marketing. They focus on the young consumers by providing them an online advertisement. Young people are getting into social media. Therefore, to steal their heart, companies should do their best to advertise their service or product on SNS.

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Hi Irene,

Thank you for sharing with me your idea about the topic we discussed.  Exactly what you said. Social Media Advertising is the most popular form of Advertising. Social media marketing has become one of the most popular and successful forms of digital marketing. Marketing through social media is one of the most versatile and cost-effective strategies that small businesses can use to reach their target audience and boost sales over time.  ~ Teacher QUENNY:)

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I think the most popular way of advertising is using a social media (SNS).
>> I think the most popular way of advertising is using social media (SNS).
 These days, many companies use SNS as a good way of marketing. 
>>  These days, many companies use SNS as a good way of marketing. (Correct)
They focus on the young consumers by providing them an online advertisement. 
>> They focus on the young consumers by providing them with an online advertisement. 
Young people are getting into social media. 
>>Young people are getting into social media nowadays. 
Therefore, to steal their heart, companies should do their best to advertise their service or product on SNS.
>>Therefore, to steal their heart, companies should do their best to advertise their service or product on SNS.

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I think the most popular way of advertising is using a social media (SNS). These days, many companies use SNS as a good way of marketing. They focus on the young consumers by providing them an online advertisement. Young people are getting into social media. Therefore, to steal their heart, companies should do their best to advertise their service or product on SNS.
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