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If you can invent something, what would it be?

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In fact, I'm not good at inventing something. But nowadays, I have one which I want to invent. (It may already exist in reality.) It is a magic glasses like Ironman's glasses. Because through the glasses, I can get many informations without searching on Internet. And I can communicate with an AI. I hope this can be invented in reality. And I want to use it in person.

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Hi Kimberly:) 

That's actually very cool. I think major electronic companies are already working on that. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

In fact, I'm not good at inventing something. 
>> CORRECT

But nowadays, I have one which I want to invent. 
>> CORRECT

(It may already exist in reality.) 
>> CORRECT

It is a magic glasses like Ironman's glasses. Because through the glasses, I can get many informations without searching on Internet. 
>> It is magic glasses like the ones that Iron Man has. Through theses glasses, I can get many information without searching on the internet. 

And I can communicate with an AI. 
>>With this, I can also communicate with an AI. 

I hope this can be invented in reality.
>> CORRECT

 And I want to use it in person.
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