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Homework_Jan.4th,2022

작성자: 남*승
2022-01-05 792

회원님의 영작문

When was the happiest day of your life?

When my family got the Covid test 5 days ago. And we all got the negative result! Because I thought at least one of us would get the positive result.

My daughter had been sick for 3 day with fever over 39 celsius degree and with the diarrhea and vomitted three times in just an hour, caughing severly before we got the test. I was terrified because she never even vomitted when she was infant. Since I knew well about the symptoms of the Covid 19 patient, and my daugher's symptoms were exactly perfectly the same as what I know, I was sure that she had the virus. But thansfully, none of us got infected!!
The happiest moment in my life it was!!

It's too difficult to write using moble phone ㅠㅠ

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, U Seung!

Oh, that's really good to hear that you are all safe. Hopefully, this pandemic will end very soon. 
Oh, so sorry to hear that you are having a hard time typing in your mobile phone TT

Thank you for sharing a happy news! Keep safe! ^_^

~T. Roanne ^_^

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Corrections and Suggestions:

1. When my family got the Covid test 5 days ago. And we all got the negative result! Because I thought at least one of us would get the positive result.
>> When my family got the COVID test 5 days ago and we all got the negative result! Because I thought at least one of us would get the positive result.
2. My daughter had been sick for 3 day with fever over 39 celsius degree and with the diarrhea and vomitted three times in just an hour, caughing severly before we got the test. 
>> My daughter had been sick for 3 days with fever over 39 degree Celsius and with the diarrhea, vomiting three times in just an hour and coughing severely before we got the test. 
3. I was terrified because she never even vomitted when she was infant. 
>> I was terrified because she never even vomited when she was an infant. 
4. Since I knew well about the symptoms of the Covid 19 patient, and my daugher's symptoms were exactly perfectly the same as what I know, I was sure that she had the virus. 
>> Since I knew well about the symptoms of the COVID-19 patients, and my daughter's symptoms were exactly perfectly the same as what I know, I was sure that she had the virus. 
5. But thansfully, none of us got infected!!
>> 
But thankfully, none of us got infected!!
6. The happiest moment in my life it was!!
>> The happiest moment in my life, it was!! Or The happiest moment in my life indeed! 
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