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My wife wants me to quit smoking.
My friend told me that there was misunderstanding between us.
My parents would like to see me frequently.
The colleugue who is next to me looks depressed because of pandemic.
The doctor recommends me to reduce food consumption.
I am Korean, living in Seoul which is the capital of Korea.
I love playing golf.
I hate someone who is talkative.
I was living in the UAE for 3 years.
I miss all friends in the UAE

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Hi Hwang!!^^ 

Thank you for sending your homework.
Here are some of my sentences: 
Me and my husband love to eat ramen.
My mother wants me to stay with her. 
I have two older brothers. 
I want to talk to a person who has sense of humor. 

Teacher Andrea

My wife wants me to quit smoking.
>> Correct
 
My friend told me that there was misunderstanding between us.
>> My friend told me that there was a misunderstanding between us.

My parents would like to see me frequently.
>> My parents like to see me frequently. 

The colleugue who is next to me looks depressed because of pandemic.
>> The colleague who is next to me looks depressed because of the pandemic. 

The doctor recommends me to reduce food consumption.
>> Correct 

I am Korean, living in Seoul which is the capital of Korea.
>> I am a Korean who lives in Seoul which is the capital city of Korea. 

I love playing golf.
>> Correct 

I hate someone who is talkative.
>> Correct 

I was living in the UAE for 3 years.
>> I lived in the UAE for three years. 

I miss all friends in the UAE
>> Correct 
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