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What kind of traditional food do you eat for Thanksgiving?

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We traditionally, we make and eat rice cakes called ¼ÛÆí(Songpyeon) on Thanksgiving Day. It is make to express thanks for harvest by adding autumn grains such as chestnuts and sesame seeds .. etc to the rice dough. In Korea, there is an interesting old saying that if you make songpyeon pretty, you will get married and have pretty children. Until I was young, I used to make various shapes at my grandparent's house in addition to the half-moon shape, but these days, many people buy them in store a lot.

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Hello Hye Won!
Thanks for sharing about this traditional food in Korea.  Check the corrections suggested and take note of them.  See you tomorrow. :)

~T. Maine



We traditionally, we make and eat rice cakes called ¼ÛÆí(Songpyeon) on Thanksgiving Day. 
>>We traditionally make and eat rice cakes called Songpyeon on Thanksgiving Day. 
It is make to express thanks for harvest by adding autumn grains such as chestnuts and sesame seeds .. etc to the rice dough. 
>>It is made to express our thanks for the harvest by adding autumn grains such as chestnuts and sesame seeds and other ingredients to the rice dough. 
In Korea, there is an interesting old saying that if you make songpyeon pretty, you will get married and have pretty children. 
>>Correct. 
Until I was young, I used to make various shapes at my grandparent's house in addition to the half-moon shape, but these days, many people buy them in store a lot.
>>When I was young, I used to make various shapes of songpyeon in my grandparent's house in addition to the half-moon shape.  These days, many people buy a lot of them in stores. 


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