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작성자: 이*빈
2022-01-06 1023

회원님의 영작문

1. Why don't you like travelling?
-> Travelling take a lot of money and energy. I like meeting friends more than travelling.
Actually, I have many travelling experiences. But that's not mean I like travelling, just my friends like travelling.
So I love my friends, I join to travelling unavoidably. Sometime it is so funny, but I don't want to pay many money at tourist attraction.

I have a chicken allergy. When I was in middle school, I found it. I really sad to them, so I can't eat anything as snack, raman, fried chicken.
I don't know chicken is in any food about that time. I was really carefull, when I was young. But these days, my allergy become weak. I often take medicine and sometimes eat a few chicken. It become weak than my middle school days, but it remain.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for writing this Yubin! I enjoyed reading it. There are some corrections, but overall, this was fun to read. - Teacher Ivy
Travelling take a lot of money and energy.

>> Travelling takes a lot of money and energy.

 I like meeting friends more than travelling.

>> Correct
Actually, I have many travelling experiences.

>> I actually have a lot of travel experiences.

But that's not mean I like travelling, just my friends like travelling.

>> But that doesn’t mean I like travelling. It’s just my friends that likes travelling.
So I love my friends, I join to travelling unavoidably.

>> Since I love my friends, it’s unavoidable to join travelling.

Sometime it is so funny, but I don't want to pay many money at tourist attraction.
>> Sometime its so funny, but I don't want to pay a lot of money at a tourist attraction.
I have a chicken allergy.

>> Correct

When I was in middle school, I found it.

>> I was in middle school when I found out.

I really sad to them, so I can't eat anything as snack, raman, fried chicken.

>> I’m really sad about it, so I can't eat anything as a snack, raman, or fried chicken.
I don't know chicken is in any food about that time.

>> I didn’t know chicken was in my food that time.

I was really carefull, when I was young.

>> I was really careful, when I was young. 

But these days, my allergy become weak.

>> But these days, my allergy became weak.

I often take medicine and sometimes eat a few chicken.

>> I often take medicine when I sometimes eat a few chicken.

It become weak than my middle school days, but it remain.

>> It became weaker compared to my middle school days, but it remains.

 

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