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The role of law is to maintain social order, to protect weak and good people , and to punish people who harm and threaten others.

If the law is tolerant to criminals, most of good people are harmed.

The law should be strict.

We must have strict standards that violate justice and morality.

If we are lenient cruel criminals, might be increase more and more social crime that ignore other's human right.

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Hi Ms. Lily! I think people follow laws due to fear of immediate punishmenthowever, if the law is limited for some people, I think the law itself is breaking its rule. We have to be vigilant.
Aki~
The role of law is to maintain social order, to protect weak and good people , and to punish people who harm and threaten others.
>>> CORRECT!
If the law is tolerant to criminals, most of good people are harmed.
>>> CORRECT!
The law should be strict.
>>> CORRECT!
We must have strict standards that violate justice and morality.
>>> We must have struct standards for those who violate justice and morality.
If we are lenient cruel criminals, might be increase more and more social crime that ignore other's human right.
>>> If we are lenient,  cruel criminals might be increasing more and more on social crime that ignore other's human rights.
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