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What\'s new with you since you moved to Canada?

작성자: 금*진
2022-01-06 365

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A lot of things happened to me since I came to Canada. I’m living in the strange countryside. I’ve been looking at a lot of snow all the time in winter and I’ve also seen the northern light, fortunately. It was amazing and made me surprised and happy.
I was scheduled to go to college to study English and major last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic. The online class is too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency. My English skill is not good now but I think it’s being better than I was in Korea.
Furthermore, I went on a vacation with my husband to Banff last September. I was looking forward to this travel since some months ago. It was quite a fantastic place as I thought. We spent a week there and we had a great time we can’t forget.
I keep trying to adjust to this life including English and my neighborhood.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Chloe! It's definitely difficult at first, but you'll get used to everything in time. Good luck!

A lot of things happened to me since I came to Canada. 
>>>  correct 
I’m living in the strange countryside. 
>>>  correct 
I’ve been looking at a lot of snow all the time in winter and I’ve also seen the northern light, fortunately. 
>>> correct   
It was amazing and made me surprised and happy.
>>> correct 
I was scheduled to go to college to study English and major last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic. 
>>>  I was scheduled to go to college to study and major in English last spring but I had to take an online class because of the pandemic.  
The online class is too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency. 
>>> The online class was too terrible and I thought it was a waste of money so I decided to quit the class and study English on my own until I’ll get a permanent residency.   
My English skill is not good now but I think it’s being better than I was in Korea.
>>> My English skill is not good now but I think it’s better than when I was in Korea.  
Furthermore, I went on a vacation with my husband to Banff last September. 
>>>  correct 
I was looking forward to this travel since some months ago. 
>>> correct 
It was quite a fantastic place as I thought. 
>>> correct  
We spent a week there and we had a great time we can’t forget.
>>>  correct 
I keep trying to adjust to this life including English and my neighborhood.
>>>  correct 

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