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Yut game!!

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My favorite Korean traditional game is À·³îÀÌ, English name is Yut game.
It's kind of board game.
Split two team, and throw the four stick.
Both two team have three or four horse.
Every horse arrive at the starting point until the ending point more faster other team.
And faster team is winner.
When the Korea traditional holiday family gathering time we gonna do it.

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Hi Ann:) 

I've seen that game before in a Korean drama that I've watched before. It's very interesting I must say. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

My favorite Korean traditional game is À·³îÀÌ, English name is Yut game.
>> My favorite Korean traditional game is À·³îÀÌ,. It is called "Yut" in English. 

It's kind of board game.
>> It's a kind of board game.

Split two team, and throw the four stick.
>> You need to split into two teams and throw 4 sticks. 

Both two team have three or four horse.
>> Both teams have 3 or 4 horses. 

Every horse arrive at the starting point until the ending point more faster other team.
>> Every horse should start on the starting point and has to reach the end faster than the other teams. 

And faster team is winner.
>> The fastest team wins. 

When the Korea traditional holiday family gathering time we gonna do it.
>> We usually do this every Korean traditional holiday with the family. 
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