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If you can cook one food every day, What would it be and why?

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I think that It's a flour food. Because I can make various things with flour like noodle, pizza and bread. It was nice to meet you and see you again.

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Hi Hyeon:) 

You have a good point there. Those are really good. 

PS: It was really nice to meet you too! 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think that It's a flour food. 
>> I think I will always make food that are made from dough. 

Because I can make various things with flour like noodle, pizza and bread. 
>> It is because I can make various dishes like noodles, pizza and bread. 

It was nice to meet you and see you again.
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