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What preparation will you do before an interview to make a good impression?

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What preparation will you do before an interview to make a good impression?

First impressions are important at interviews.
People dress well and decent appearance to make a good impression.
The most important for an interview is speech.
To avoid making mistake during the interview, it needs a lot of practice.

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Hi Monica:) 

There is a saying that "First impressions last" so we have to make the best out of it. Those are actually god practices to make good impressions. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

First impressions are important at interviews.
>> First impressions are important in interviews.

People dress well and decent appearance to make a good impression.
>> People dress well and make decent appearances to make a good impression.

The most important for an interview is speech.
>> CORRECT

To avoid making mistake during the interview, it needs a lot of practice
>> To avoid making mistake during the interview, you need to do a lot of practicing. 
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