¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

the court

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ç*Èñ
2022-01-07 1020

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think that the decision of the court is not fair.

Even because the criminals regret and offense of first time is not reasons to forgive them.

There could be reasons in violation and crimes.

But It must be shown the be forgiven such excuses.

The law have to keep social order and protect good people's human right.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Ms. Lily! same thought I have in mind that the verdict of the court is not fair. Thank you for sharing honestly your thought. Have a great day!
Aki~
I think that the decision of the court is not fair.
>>>  I think the decision of the court is not fair.
Even because the criminals regret and offense of first time is not reasons to forgive them.
>>> Regardless of the criminal being regretful or his record, these  are not reasons to forgive him.
There could be reasons in violation and crimes.
>>> There could be reasons of violation and crimes.
But It must  be shown the be forgiven such excuses.
>>>  But it's not an excuse to show forgiveness
>>>  But it's not an excuse to forgive without justice.
The law have to keep social order and protect good people's human right.
>>>  The law has to keep social order and protect good's people's human rights.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
114349 Christmas:) ÀÌ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 177
114348 What do you and your family usually do during Christmas? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 214
114347 Do you have healthy eating habits? ÀÌ*¶÷ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 3
114346 Correction RQ if any. ¼­*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 7
114345 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 247
114344 movie time! ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 275
114343 Homework ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 171
114342 Painting ±â*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 181
114341 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 8
114340 Homework. ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 4
114339 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 123
114338 Cool ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 167
114337 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 1
114336 Why ±è*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 320
114335 2021 is almost over~ ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 740
114334 Celeb Alcohol Ads Fuel Un derage Drinking À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 1
114333 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 1
114332 Dog meat consumption to be put to test À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 1
114331 underage ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 210
114330 What are your long-term plans? ÁÖ*¼® ¿Ï·á 2021-12-01 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04