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I think that the decision of the court is not fair.

Even because the criminals regret and offense of first time is not reasons to forgive them.

There could be reasons in violation and crimes.

But It must be shown the be forgiven such excuses.

The law have to keep social order and protect good people's human right.

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Hello Ms. Lily! same thought I have in mind that the verdict of the court is not fair. Thank you for sharing honestly your thought. Have a great day!
Aki~
I think that the decision of the court is not fair.
>>>  I think the decision of the court is not fair.
Even because the criminals regret and offense of first time is not reasons to forgive them.
>>> Regardless of the criminal being regretful or his record, these  are not reasons to forgive him.
There could be reasons in violation and crimes.
>>> There could be reasons of violation and crimes.
But It must  be shown the be forgiven such excuses.
>>>  But it's not an excuse to show forgiveness
>>>  But it's not an excuse to forgive without justice.
The law have to keep social order and protect good people's human right.
>>>  The law has to keep social order and protect good's people's human rights.
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