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How do you try to spice up your weekend?

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Thank you for this Lisa!

I have 5 ideas here.

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#1 Get the sleep and rest we need.

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Contrary to what many people think, taking a weekend off is not a waste of time! 

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But we should take care of ourselves and make sure we get a good rest for the next week.

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#2 Read or study a book.

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The most important book for me is the Bible. 

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The Bible helps me to develop wisdom and to build good relationships with others. 

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It can help us be more harmonious with our family and our relatives. 

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It helps us to solve the problem caused by many worries and anxiety in our life. 

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we also feel comforted in times of loneliness and hardship.

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#3 See a friend for a coffee break.

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Most of us don't have much space to meet up with friends on weekdays because most of us are packed with class schedules or work schedules.

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What could be more perfect than doing it on the weekend? 

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Grab a good coffee or meal and grab a chance to catch up with everyone. 

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But these days, there is a way to meet up with Zoom. 

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Actually, in my case, I met a Canadian friend and a British friend, and a Mexican friend at the same time on Saturday morning by using zoom. 

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Meeting at Zoom is very convenient and affordable. haha

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#4 Enjoy a mini-vacation

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There are several beautiful places near my house. 

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For example, Farmland which has some animals and a beautiful lake with sunset, well-developed parks which has woods. 

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Sometimes I go there for taking a walk, having a coffee and enjoying the fresh air. 

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In contrast to the hustle and bustle of the city, God's creation of nature always provides great relaxation for humans.

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#5 Watch Movies

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If you go to the JW.org website, you will find a variety of videos and movies. 

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I mostly like movies with biblical characters like "Jonah" and "Daniel", etc. 

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They are very interesting, informative, and valuable.

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