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Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. He lost his eyesight because of enfluenza.
2. My grandma pass along us two diamond rings.
3. My family love mixed genre movie like romantic fantazy.
4. I love the original version of but my mom loves the new version.
5. My passion is writing.

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Here's your corrected homework, Clair!
Thanks for sending it. See you next week! Happy weekend!

Cheers,
Jean~~

                   Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.

1. He lost his eyesight because of enfluenza.
>> He lost his eyesight because of influenza. [Please note the spelling of "influenza".]

2. My grandma pass along us two diamond rings.
>>  My grandma passed along two diamond rings to us.

3. My family love mixed genre movie like romantic fantazy.
>> My family loves mixed-genre movies like romantic fantasy.

4. I love the original version of but my mom loves the new version.
>>  I love the original version of (Rapunzel) but my mom prefers the new or modern version.

5. My passion is writing.
>> or: I have a passion for writing.
>> or: I'm passionate about writing. 
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