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What would you do if you could no longer contact the person who borrowed money from you?

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I don\'t like to imagine this terrible situation, but I would give up the money because I don\'t want to lose the person who borrowed the money as well.
For my peace of mind, I would put the money behind me. It is useless to think about the bad debts over and over again. It would be only to offend me.
But we occasionally come across something that appears to be a misfortune at first has an unexpected benefit. It reminds me of the famous story about a blessing in disguise.
Once upon a time, there was an old man named Se-ong, who raised horses. One day, one of his horses ran away. people said \"How unlucky you are to lose your precious horse!.\" But he replied placidly, \"Well, Nobody knows how it will turn out\". After some time, the horse that had run away returned with many wild horses. People said, \"Congratulations on you!. Now you become rich\". But he said calmly \"This could be a disaster.\" - contiuned on next page.

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Hi, Steve! Thank you so much for sharing this story. I can't wait to go to the next page.  However, please be careful with your punctuation marks. 

- Debbie

I don\'t like to imagine this terrible situation, but I would give up the money because I don\'t want to lose the person who borrowed the money as well.
>> I don't like to imagine this terrible situation. However, if this happened to me, I would give up the money because I wouldn't want to lose the person who borrowed the money from me.

For my peace of mind, I would put the money behind me.
>> For my peace of mind, I would put it behind me.

 It is useless to think about the bad debts over and over again.
>> It would be useless think about the debt over and over.

 It would be only to offend me.
>> It would only stress me.

But we occasionally come across something that appears to be a misfortune at first has an unexpected benefit. 
>> However, we occasionally come across something that appears to be a misfortune at first but turns out to have an unexpected benefit. 

It reminds me of the famous story about a blessing in disguise.
>>  It reminds me of a famous story about a blessing in disguise.

Once upon a time, there was an old man named Se-ong, who raised horses.
>> This is a good sentence.

 One day, one of his horses ran away. 
>> This is a good sentence.

people said \"How unlucky you are to lose your precious horse!.\" 
>> People said, "How unlucky you are to lose your precious horse!"

But he replied placidly, \"Well, Nobody knows how it will turn out\". 
>> However, he replied, "Well. Nobody knows how it will turn out."

After some time, the horse that had run away returned with many wild horses. 
>> This is a good sentence.

People said, \"Congratulations on you!. Now you become rich\". 
>> People said, "Congratulations! Now you've become rich."

But he said calmly \"This could be a disaster.\"
>> However, he said calmly, "This could be a disaster."

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