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A few months later, his worry became a reality. the old man's son fell off one of the wild horses and became lame. Again people came to him, and said "I am sorry your son became disabled." But he again replied to people "This could be a blessing in disguise".

After a long time to forget the sadness, a war broke out. King conscripted many young men for the army. But the old man's son could be exempted from military service. So people learned why the old man was so calm in everything. and the old man replied, "Life is full of misfortunes and blessings in disguise. Let's live calmly"

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Hello, Steve! I like the story. It reminds me people to have a positive outlook in life.  I am happy that you are have this outlook. 

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A few months later, his worry became a reality. 
>> This is a good sentence.

the old man's son fell off one of the wild horses and became lame. 
>> The old man's son fell off from one of the wild horses and became lame.

Again people came to him, and said "I am sorry your son became disabled." 
>> People came to him again and said, "I am sorry for your son became disabled." 

But he again replied to people "This could be a blessing in disguise".
>> He replied, "This could be a blessing in disguise."

After a long time to forget the sadness, a war broke out. 
>> After a long time of sadness, a war broke out.

King conscripted many young men for the army. But the old man's son could be exempted from military service. 
>> The king conscripted many young men for the army, but the old man's son could be exempted from the military service.

So people learned why the old man was so calm in everything. 
>> People then learned why the old man was so calm in everything that had happened. 

and the old man replied, "Life is full of misfortunes and blessings in disguise. Let's live calmly"
>> The old man said, "Life is full of misfortunes and blessings in disguise. Let's live calmly."


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