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What can transform a person\'s business to a higher level?

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A business can grade up through good communication, which is composed of language skills, good manners, and professional knowledge.

First, language skill is essential when you trade with foreigners. Because English becomes one of the most common languages, English skills will help your business grow through making deals with foreign companies as well as domestic companies.
Second, good manners are the first step to starting your business. A business is something that people do with people, so manners between people are very important.
Thrid, professional knowledge is required to offer services or products that customers want. If you want to win a contract, you have to be equipped with related professional knowledge.

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A business can be improved through communication. It involves good manners, language skills, and professional knowledge.

Second, good manners are the first step to starting your business. 
>> Having good manners is the first step in starting your business.

A business is something that people do with people, so manners between people are very important.
>> A business is something that people do with others, so having good manners is very important.

First, language skill is essential when you trade with foreigners. 
>>Second, a language skill is essential when you trade with foreigners. 

Because English becomes one of the most common languages, English skills will help your business grow through making deals with foreign companies as well as domestic companies.
>> Because English is one of the most spoken languages, strong English skills will help your business grow. Making deals with foreign companies, as well as domestic companies, will make it bigger. 

Thrid, professional knowledge is required to offer services or products that customers want. 
>> Third, having professional knowledge is required to offer the kinds of services or products that customers want.

If you want to win a contract, you have to be equipped with related professional knowledge.
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