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when I am having dinner today, this topic pops into my head. So I want to make my homework with this topic.
Have you ever eaten Kimchee? My most favorite Korean food is Kimchee. These days, it is even more delicious. Most of Korean make it on November. After we make it, we eat it with boiled pork and some oysters. The first time we are finished, it tastes very fresh vegetables with seasoning. As time goes by, it has had very unique flavor. I am very satisfied with this tasty. So my family likes it, too. Actually, we are very disappointed in Kimchee last year. Because it was very salty and the salted cabbage was not fresh.

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Hello Miss Rachel!

Thank you for your hard work in always answering the homework. 
Your homework is very interesting.. Do you still make Kimchi through the process of Kimjang? I heard it is a very tiring endeavor.
I also hope you and your family's health is okay, especially when colds and flu are widespread recently.

Take care!
-Teacher Violet.

when I am having dinner today, this topic pops into my head. 
>> When I was having dinner today, this topic popped into my head.

So I want to make my homework with this topic.
>> So I want to do my homework with this topic.

Have you ever eaten Kimchee? 
>> OR Kimchi (Kimchee is an alternative spelling)

My most favorite Korean food is Kimchee. 
>>CORRECT!

These days, it is even more delicious. 
>> CORRECT!

Most of Korean make it on November. 
>> Most Koreans make it in November. 
(note: We use in+month/year)

After we make it, we eat it with boiled pork and some oysters.
>> CORRECT!

The first time we are finished, it tastes very fresh vegetables with seasoning. 
>> The first time we are finished, it tastes like very fresh vegetables with seasoning. 

As time goes by, it has had very unique flavor. 
>> As time goes by, it will have/develop a very unique flavor.

I am very satisfied with this tasty. 
>>I am very satisfied with this taste.

So my family likes it, too.
>> So my family likes it too.

Actually, we are very disappointed in Kimchee last year. 
>> Actually, we were very disappointed in Kimchee last year. 

Because it was very salty and the salted cabbage was not fresh.
>> CORRECT!
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