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What do you think is the top 3 food that can be best eaten during winter and why.

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The main food for Koreans are rice and soup. Elderly, espeially, can't have their meal without hot soup. We get used to be eat these food in any season. There is saying "Fight fire with fire" in my country. It means that overcome hot weather by drinking hot soup such as chicken soup. It has changed a lot what people like eating according to the generations, young people don't love having tradiational Korean food but old people still eat rice, various side dishes and hot soup. I am in the middle of both generation whose have experienced both culture. I don't mind having a western food and also like authentic food. The first thing I like is grilled pork, secondly sushi, finally, I love eating "kimbab". However, if it is things with alchool, I would have tripe the best. In winter, we can see a lot of street food such as fish cake soup, steamed see foods and dumplings. I like it because it makes my body warm. I think it's the season that people would like to eat hot food.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Hwang!^^ 

Rice is also a staple food here in the Philippines. Regardless of the weather, we always have rice. Though w don't have winter season in our country, from May to September is our rainy season. We always serve rice and viands. First viand on the list is beef stew, sour pork stew, and chocolate rice porridge. Same goes from December until February, these are the coldest months and therefore, most of the time we cook soups and stews. 

Teacher Andrea

The main food for Koreans are rice and soup. 
>> The main food of Koreans are rice and soup. 

Elderly, espeially, can't have their meal without hot soup. 
>> Elderly, especially, can't have their meals without soup. 

We get used to be eat these food in any season. 
>> We are used eating these kinds of food in any season. 

There is saying "Fight fire with fire" in my country. 
>> Correct 

It means that overcome hot weather by drinking hot soup such as chicken soup. 
>> Correct 

It has changed a lot what people like eating according to the generations, young people don't love having tradiational Korean food but old people still eat rice, various side dishes and hot soup. 
>> Food that people like to eat changed a lot from generation to generation, younger people don't like having traditional Korean food but old people still eat rice, various side dishes and hot soup.

I am in the middle of both generation whose have experienced both culture.
>> I am in the middle of both generations who was able to experience both cultures.

 I don't mind having a western food and also like authentic food. 
>> Correct 

The first thing I like is grilled pork, secondly sushi, finally, I love eating "kimbab". 
>> The first thing I like is grilled pork, followed by sushi,  and finally, I love eating "kimbab". 

However, if it is things with alchool, I would have tripe the best. 
>> However, with alcohol, the best would be tripe. 

In winter, we can see a lot of street food such as fish cake soup, steamed see foods and dumplings. 
>> In winter, we can see a lot of street food such as fish cake soup., steamed seafood and dumpling. 

I like it because it makes my body warm. 
>> Correct

I think it's the season that people would like to eat hot food. 
>> Correct  
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