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There is no policies in Korea politics.
Politicians seem to plan policies only with subsidies.
Subsidy is like drugs.
People are requiring several subsidies and think not thankful things but their's right.
I think politians are really bad people. I despise them.

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Ms. Lily, Thank you for the effort of doing your homework. I know yo are a very busy person but your dedication is really appreciated. Take care!
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There is no policies in Korea politics.
>>> There are no policies in Korean politics.
Politicians seem to plan policies only with subsidies.
>>> correct!
Subsidy is like drugs.
>>> The subsidy is like drugs.
>>> The subsidy is becoming like drugs.
People are requiring several subsidies and think not thankful things but their's right.
>>> People are acquiring several subsidies but they believe they shouldn't be thankful because it is their right.
I think politians are really bad people. I despise them.
>>> I think politicians are really bad people. I despise them.
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