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Not all subsidies are always helpful the welfare of people.

Unconditionally excessive subsidies interrupt people's rational perception.

In Korea, subsidies bring causes of conflicts among people.

People don't judge if subsidies are socially beneficial or not.

New elementary subsidies is a kind stupid policy of them.

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Good day Ms. Lily! The government tries to impress people in the form of subsidies. Thank you for honestly sharing your thought.
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Not all subsidies are always helpful the welfare of people.
>>> Not all subsidies are always helpful to the welfare of people.
Unconditionally excessive subsidies interrupt people's rational perception.
>>> Correct!
In Korea, subsidies bring causes of conflicts among people.
>>> Correct!
People don't judge if subsidies are socially beneficial or not.
>>> Correct!
New elementary subsidies is a kind stupid policy of them.
>>> New elementary subsidies are a kind of stupid policy of them.
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