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If there is a place where you wished to be born, where would it be and why?

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I wish I born in the UK.
Because the UK has the culture that I love.
When I was kid, I read 'Sherlock holmes'.
Maybe Sherlock is my first love.
I used to imagine Baker street, UK.
When I was teenager, I fell in love with a rock music.
especially I like British rock band.
always I've been wished to be a British girl and want to drink some beer at a pub with a 90's rock music.

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Wonderful day Yun Ju! Thank you for expressing your thought by writing. Your effort of doing this is really appreciated. keep going because in due time, you will be able to reach your goal in the field of English.
T. Aki~
I wish I born in the UK.
>>> I wish I was born in the UK.
Because the UK has the culture that I love.
>>> Correct!
When I was kid, I read 'Sherlock holmes'.
>>> When I was a kid, I read 'Sherlock Holmes'.
>>>I read "Sherlock Holmes" when I was a kid.
Maybe Sherlock is my first love.
>>> Maybe Sherlock became my first love.
I used to imagine Baker street, UK.
>>> I used to imagine Baker street, in the United Kingdom.
When I was teenager, I fell in love with a rock music..
>>> When I was a teenager, I fell in love with rock music.
especially I like British rock band.
>>> I especially liked a British rock band.
always I've been wished to be a British girl and want to drink some beer at a pub with a 90's rock music
>>>> I've been always wishing to be a British girl who drinks some beer at a pub with 90's rock music.
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