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Which is better, online medical consultations or face-to-face medical consultations? Why?

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I think face-to-face medical consultation is better than online medical consultation because I think doctors can check the patient more exactly through face-to-face medical consultation. However, in a remote country where people take a few hours to go to the nearest hospital, people can resort to online medical checkups to maintain their health.

Online medical consultation is still against the law in Korea, but I think the government must make this online medical checkup legal and support it actively.

Consequently, many people are living far away from health services, such as hospitals and public health centers, we need to narrow the dead zone of health service at all costs.

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Hi, Steve! I learned something about Korea through your homework. I didn't know online medical consultations weren't allowed in your country. I wonder why they aren't permitted yet.

- Debbie

I think face-to-face medical consultation is better than online medical consultation because I think doctors can check the patient more exactly through face-to-face medical consultation. 
>> I think face-to-face medical consultations are better than online medical consultations because doctors can check the patients thoroughly through face-to-face medical consultations. 

However, in a remote country where people take a few hours to go to the nearest hospital, people can resort to online medical checkups to maintain their health.
>>  However, in a remote country where people take a few hours to go to the nearest hospital, people can't resort to online medical checkups to maintain their health.

Online medical consultation is still against the law in Korea, but I think the government must make this online medical checkup legal and support it actively.
>> Conducting online medical consultations is still against the law in Korea, but I think the government must make it legal and support it actively.

Consequently, many people are living far away from health services, such as hospitals and public health centers, we need to narrow the dead zone of health service at all costs.
>> There are many people who are living far away from health care facilities, such as hospitals and public health centers, so we need to narrow the dead zones at all costs.
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