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Absolutely dogs should be banned from the park.
That's because dogs can hurt people passing through the park.
Personally, I am so scared of dogs because they can hurt me by biting me.
And the park gets dirty with their feces.
If the park isn't clean, people will no longer be able to use it as a resting place.

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Hi Eun Ha!
We have never talked about your love for pets before. 
I don't even know if you have a pet.
Let's talk about that next time.
I agree with your point here.
I think we're on the same wavelength.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Absolutely dogs should be banned from the park.
>> Absolutely, dogs should be banned from parks.
That's because dogs can hurt people passing through the park.
>> That's because dogs can hurt people passing through the parks.
Personally, I am so scared of dogs because they can hurt me by biting me.
>> Correct
And the park gets dirty with their feces.
>> Parks get dirty with their feces.
If the park isn't clean, people will no longer be able to use it as a resting place.
>> If the parks aren't clean, people will no longer be able to use them as a resting place.
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