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How necessary is it to ask for permission?

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It¡¯s not an easy and clear problem but I think it depends on the form of relations. If we are in very close relations like couples and family, I think we have to tell the truth without hiding something. On the other hand, we don¡¯t need to ask for permission if we are just acquaintances. If what the other person hates will happen and we knew it first, I think that asking for permission first is right. Even though we didn¡¯t know it first, we have to talk about it honestly later. If not, it can bring a lot of problems and lose faith to each other. If the problems such as this also keep repeating, it would cause spoiling all relationships and be not together anymore. There wouldn't be anyone who wants this situation.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

It¡¯s not an easy and clear problem but I think it depends on the form of relations. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: It¡¯s not an easy and clear problem but I think it depends on the kind of relationship. 
If we are in very close relations like couples and family, I think we have to tell the truth without hiding something. 
>>> correct     
On the other hand, we don¡¯t need to ask for permission if we are just acquaintances. 
>>> correct     
If what the other person hates will happen and we knew it first, I think that asking for permission first is right. 
>>>  correct     
Even though we didn¡¯t know it first, we have to talk about it honestly later. 
>>>  Even though we didn¡¯t know it at first, we have to talk about it honestly later.   
If not, it can bring a lot of problems and lose faith to each other. 
>>> correct      
If the problems such as this also keep repeating, it would cause spoiling all relationships and be not together anymore. 
>>If the problems such as this also keep repeating, it would cause spoiling all relationships and we would not be together anymore.     
There wouldn't be anyone who wants this situation.
>>>  correct
>>> OR: There isn't anyone who wants this kind of situation. 

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