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1. When is the best time to visit your country?
: My parents wish I will be good and smart person. So when I was 6, I started to study Math, English and Piano etc..
For that reasons, I haven't often seen sea even though I literally love a sea. However, when I was 20, I got freedom. I can go everywhere I want. So I have been to Jeju island and Daecheon(Korea's representative beach country) with my friends. There are beautiful beach, sky and scrumptious foods. The foods are too expensive, but Jeju and Daecheon's sea foods are very delicious. I can't forget the flavor, I really miss them.
But now, Neither you nor I can go on a trip, also meeting a friends is not easy. Because COVID-19 interrupted with everyone, that is so heinous. I literally hope that a pandemic disappear.

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My parents wish I will be good and smart person. 
>> My parents wish that I will be good and smart person. 
So when I was 6, I started to study Math, English and Piano etc..
>> So when I was 6, I started studying Math, English, piano and etc.
For that reasons, I haven't often seen sea even though I literally love a sea. 
>> For that reason, I haven't seen the ocean even though I really love it.
However, when I was 20, I got freedom. 
>> However, when I was 20 I have freedom.
I can go everywhere I want. 
>> Correct
So I have been to Jeju island and Daecheon(Korea's representative beach country) with my friends. 
>> So I have been to Jeju island and Daecheon with my friends, which is Korea's representative beach country.
There are beautiful beach, sky and scrumptious foods. 
>> There are beautiful beaches, beautiful sky and scrumptious foods. 
The foods are too expensive, but Jeju and Daecheon's sea foods are very delicious. 
>> The foods are too expensive, but Jeju and Daecheon's seafoods are very delicious. 
I can't forget the flavor, I really miss them.
>> Correct
But now, Neither you nor I can go on a trip, also meeting a friends is not easy. 
Because COVID-19 interrupted with everyone, that is so heinous. 
>> But these days, neither you nor I can't go on a trip. Also, meeting friends is not easy because of covid 19.
I literally hope that a pandemic disappear.
>> I really hope that this pandemic will disappear soon.
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