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Can you give me one superstition in South Korea? Explain in detail.

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I know about one superstition in South Korea. I'm going to die If I turn on the electric fan. It's and old superstition from my parents age. :)

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Hi Hyeon:) 

I've heard of that before and I wonder what it's origin. It's so weird. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

I know about one superstition in South Korea. 
>> CORRECT

I'm going to die If I turn on the electric fan. 
>> It is that I can die if I turn on the electric fan while I am sleeping. 

It's and old superstition from my parents age.
>> It's and old superstition from my parents generation.

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