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Jinju has many different charms.
If you want to have leisure in the nature or city, both are possible in Jinju.
Jinju is famous for light festival that is held in the Nam river.

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Good day, Julia! Thank you for sharing things about your city. I am truly fascinated especially about the light festival :) Enjoy your day.
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Jinju has many different charms.
>>> jinju has many attractions.
If you want to have leisure in the nature or city, both are possible in Jinju.
>>> Correct!
Jinju is famous for light festival that is held in the Nam river.
'>>> Jinju is famous for its light festival that is held in the Nam River.

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