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I also think that the present is more important than planning for the future. Future is included in the present. To live hard at the present is to be prepared to the future. I believe that the future exist because the present exist.
From the prospection of the country, It is quite different to compare to individuals, but a country have to think our future for everyone. Many policies are decided based on the present issues. So, It would be taken close look the present and more concentrated on the present for the future.
Therefore, I agree with this issue that some people think.

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HAPPY FRIDAY LUEL! The weekend is coming soon. Any plans? I hope you'll have a good one!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I also think that the present is more important than planning for the future.
>>> CORRECT
 Future is included in the present. 
>>> The future is included in the present. 
To live hard at the present is to be prepared to the future. 
>>>To live harder at the present is to be prepared for the future. 
I believe that the future exist because the present exist.
>>> I believe that the future will exist because the present exists.
From the prospection of the country, It is quite different to compare to individuals, but a country have to think our future for everyone.
>>> From the perspective of the country, it is quite different to compare every individual, but a country has to think our future for everyone.
 Many policies are decided based on the present issues. 
>>> CORRECT
So, it would be taken close look the present and more concentrated on the present for the future.
>>> So, if we would take a close look at the present and we could be more concentrated on the present for the future.
Therefore, I agree with this issue that some people think.
>>> Therefore, I agree with this issue that some people think...
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