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Famouse superstition

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It was very famous superstition when I was Elementary school student.
There's a rumor that I should never go back to home alone.
Because a red mask.
Red mask is women and her face is look so terrible.
Her mouth is ripped, so always she wearing a red mask.
If someone run into her, everytime she ask like
and if you said yes, suddenly she will ripped your mouth.
If you said no, she will be yelling, crying and she said like I can't be the only one who lives like this. You're going to make it like this, too.
And ripped your mouth.
Anyway,,,...ripped someone mouth superstition.

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It was very famous superstition when I was Elementary school student.
>> It is a very famous superstition when I w as in elementary school. 

There's a rumor that I should never go back to home alone.
>> There's a rumor that I should never go home alone. 

Because a red mask.
>> It is about the girl with the red mask. 

Red mask is women and her face is look so terrible.
>> The face of that woman is so terrible. 

Her mouth is ripped, so always she wearing a red mask.
>> Her mouth is ripped so she is always wearing a red mask.

If someone run into her, everytime she ask like <Am I pretty?>
>> If someone runs into her, she will ask, "Am I pretty?". 

and if you said yes, suddenly she will ripped your mouth.
>> If you say yes, she will rip your mouth. 

If you said no, she will be yelling, crying and she said like I can't be the only one who lives like this. 
>> If you say no, she still start yelling and crying. She'll tell you that she shouldn't be the only one who lives like this. 

You're going to make it like this, too.
>> "You need to look like me as well". 

And ripped your mouth.
>> Then she will rip your mouth. 

Anyway,,,...ripped someone mouth superstition
>> Anyway, this is just a superstition. 
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