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Instrument is very important thing to music.
I think sing is not to sing.
Just talk and help to instrumental.
When I have a class at my academy, every time I told my students please listen to instrument.
Hear a bass. Bass line is basic of the beat.
If I can play the some instrument so good, I'll have a more knowledge of music.
I think learn to instrumental is very important.

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Hi Ann:) 

Yes, you are correct. If you want to pursue this kind of career then learning how to play an instrument can be beneficial for you. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

Instrument is very important thing to music.
>> I think instruments are very important to music. 

I think sing is not to sing.
>> I think singing is not just singing. 

Just talk and help to instrumental.
>> There are instrumentals as well in a song. 

When I have a class at my academy, every time I told my students please listen to instrument.
>> Whenever I have a class at my academy, I always tell my students to listen to instruments. 

Hear a bass. 
>> Listen to a bass. 

Bass line is basic of the beat.
>> A bass line is the basic of a beat. 

If I can play the some instrument so good, I'll have a more knowledge of music.
>> If I can play an instrument well , I'll have  more knowledge to music. 

I think learn to instrumental is very important 
>> I think learning how to play an instrument is very important. 

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