¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Learn instrument.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*Àº
2022-01-13 648

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Instrument is very important thing to music.
I think sing is not to sing.
Just talk and help to instrumental.
When I have a class at my academy, every time I told my students please listen to instrument.
Hear a bass. Bass line is basic of the beat.
If I can play the some instrument so good, I'll have a more knowledge of music.
I think learn to instrumental is very important.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Ann:) 

Yes, you are correct. If you want to pursue this kind of career then learning how to play an instrument can be beneficial for you. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

Instrument is very important thing to music.
>> I think instruments are very important to music. 

I think sing is not to sing.
>> I think singing is not just singing. 

Just talk and help to instrumental.
>> There are instrumentals as well in a song. 

When I have a class at my academy, every time I told my students please listen to instrument.
>> Whenever I have a class at my academy, I always tell my students to listen to instruments. 

Hear a bass. 
>> Listen to a bass. 

Bass line is basic of the beat.
>> A bass line is the basic of a beat. 

If I can play the some instrument so good, I'll have a more knowledge of music.
>> If I can play an instrument well , I'll have  more knowledge to music. 

I think learn to instrumental is very important 
>> I think learning how to play an instrument is very important. 

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
115863 Who are the people you always rely on? ¾ö*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 405
115862 Do you think that older people are always right? Why or why not? Ȳ*º° ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 649
115861 Over one-third of South Koreans paid subscribers to OTT... À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 1
115860 Homework ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 233
115859 There will be commotion in the city ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 732
115858 Family importance ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 372
115857 Do you like meeting new people? ÀÌ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 2
115856 What is your favorite movie? Why? ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 199
115855 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 385
115854 My Homework °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 346
115853 homework °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 1
115852 Have you ever felt discrimination from other people before? How... ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 576
115851 What do you think is your main purpose in life? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 0
115850 Monday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 404
115849 If a book has been made into a movie, which do you prefer to do... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 0
115848 ESSAY: Explain this quote: No Man Is An Island Àü*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 269
115847 Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! ¿À*°á ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 238
115846 HOMEWORK ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 432
115845 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 141
115844 The upset ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-24 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04