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How do you handle pressure?

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The pressure provided me with the opportunity for professional growth. While tackling pressures, I learned to allocate the time to juggle multiple tasks at once. This result was possible because pressure allowed me to think beyond my knowledge base. For example, there was the time I had to tackle down five tasks in a month. From the tight deadlines, I created a detailed monthly, weekly, and daily schedule to analyze my work progress. Every Friday, I did a self-evaluation to discover my weakness and room for improvement. Throughout the evaluation, I found out that delays were from proofreading from manual work. Therefore, I invested in grammar checkup tools to shorten the time to 20%. With this kind of small investment, I could finish all the tasks on schedule. From this experience, I learned that self-consciousness and constantly navigating development are crucial to handling stress in the workplace.

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Thanks for this as well Aciel! Keep them coming. 

The pressure provided me with the opportunity for professional growth. 
>>> correct  
While tackling pressures, I learned to allocate the time to juggle multiple tasks at once. 
>>> correct    
This result was possible because pressure allowed me to think beyond my knowledge base. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: This result was possible because pressure allowed me to think beyond my knowledge limits.    
For example, there was the time I had to tackle down five tasks in a month. 
>>> correct    
From the tight deadlines, I created a detailed monthly, weekly, and daily schedule to analyze my work progress. 
>>> correct     
Every Friday, I did a self-evaluation to discover my weakness and room for improvement. 
>>> correct    
Throughout the evaluation, I found out that delays were from proofreading from manual work. 
>>> correct    
Therefore, I invested in grammar checkup tools to shorten the time to 20%. 
>>> correct    
With this kind of small investment, I could finish all the tasks on schedule. 
>>> correct     
From this experience, I learned that self-consciousness and constantly navigating development are crucial to handling stress in the workplace.
>>>  correct   

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